Custom clip request 

I would like to order the definitive peril video with Melanie. It will be a long video (around 30 minutes) 

divided into three parts. I t will be again focused on close shots of the most hard and realistic

possible body hits to Melanie´s body. 

In the first part (around 10 minutes), Melanie will be wearing the same black leather jacket as in

my last custom “Melanie´s attempt to revenge was failed. Part 2”. Under it, she will be wearing

the black leather catsuit used in the three preview videos I have ordered. 

She will be also wearing black leather gloves and the dominatrix boots she wore in the first two

parts of my last custom.

Melanie will face Rob and another guy (it could be any of the guys from my customs 1 and 2) from the

beginning: The video will start with a frontal close shot of Melanie´s boots, and the camera will move

up to show Melanie´s entire body. She says: “I have been training and my abs are steel now” I am

going to destroy you. The two guys attack Melanie, but she blocks and avoids every hit, and manages

to hit them. During a minute, she beats them, but then, while she´s blocking Rob´s punch, the other guy

punches her in the belly (I want to see a hard impact on the leather jacket, which is closed and zipped

up). She smiles and says “I felt nothing”, and kicks the guy in the balls. After that, she starts beating

Rob again (the other guy still on the ground). Finally, Rob catches her fist, presses it and makes her hit

herself in the face with her own fist. She is angry and says: “you shouldn´t have done that”. She

furiously attacks Rob, and knocks him to the ground and starts kicking him quickly and furiously in the

face until he lays face-up on the ground. She starts pressing his neck with her boot, choking him. He

punches her boot twice, but no effect. When he is about to lose consciousness, the other guy traps her

from behind with a neck hold. She tries to quit his forearm from her neck, but he keeps it. Rob wakes

up and furiously looks at her legs, and starts kicking both of her boots at the calves point, but she doesn

´t seem to feel much pain. He starts to brutally (and I mean brutally) punching her in the belly (while

the other guy still holds her). I want to see clearly the impact of the fists on the leather jacket. 8

punches in a shot where the frame catches her from her knees to her face, and then another 10 punches

in an even closer shot where we see her from her groin to her neck and the fist enters the frame and

impacts hardly on the leather jacket. Then a shot of her face while she is till being punched. Her face

seems to be struggling to deal with the impacts, which are brutal, but when Rob stops punching her, she

smiles and says: “Now I felt something, it was like …….. giggles” Then Rob says: “Her belly seems to

be too hard” Let´s try with the chest”. They throw her brutally against a column and the impact on her

back is terrible, and before she can react, the other guy in a close shot from Melanie´s hips to her face, 

punches her chest 10 times brutally. Please, make the impacts on the leather jacket as strong and clear

and possible (obviously, not hurting the actress). Then is Rob´s turn and, and in the same shot, he

punches her brutally 15 times also in the chest (focus on the impacts on the leather jacket again). After

those 15, he punches her chest again three times, pressing her chest as much as possible with the fist

after each one of these three punches. During all these 28 punches, her face suggest gradually more and

more pain, and she moans stronger, and while Rob presses her chest with his fist after the last punch, 

she screams in pain for the first time. Realizing they are hurting her, she counterattacks, and hits them

again. During the next two minutes, the fight is balanced. I give you freedom to choreograph these two

minutes, but please, when Melanie is hit, I want to see the impact of the fist or foot on her body clearly.

After these two minutes, Rob catches her two fists and headbutts her twice, making her down on one of

her knees, but she stands up again and Rob starts kicking her legs, right and left, until she falls on her

knees again. Then he kicks her really hard on her face, sending her face-down to the ground. With her

on the ground, he punches her hard on the back 8 times. I want to see four of these punches in really

close shots. Then he stomps on her back 8 times. I want to see the impacts on the leather jacket in

rather close shots. She tries to get up, but still in “cat position” the other guy kicks her really hard on

the side, sending her to the ground, this time face-up. The second guy stomps her 5 times on the chest 

(please make these 5 impacts as hard and real as possible), and then Rob stomps her 10 times

(obviously, some close shots too) on the belly. She touches her belly and chest in pain, moaning

strongly, but suddenly she reacts again kicking the second guy in the groin. He tries the same with Rob, 

but he catches her leg, punches it twice with the other hand, and then drags her by the boot along the

ground. He catches her by the flaps of her jacket and make her stand up again. He puts her again

against the wall and in a shot that captures her from her knees to her face, punches her brutally 10 times

in the belly. Then another 10 punches in the same shot where after each punch, he presses hard against

her belly. After these 20 punches, he makes a combo all over her body with around 50 punches all over

her torso (belly, sides, ribs, chest). While she is being punched all over her torso, she starts screaming

in pain and her face suggests real pain. Rob finishes the combo and she starts falling to the ground, but

Rob catches her in this position:

The other guy gets up and while Robs holds Melanie exactly this way, he brutally kicks her 12 times on

her belly in a shot like this, and then another 6 times in a close shot where we only see Melanie´s body

occupying the frame from her head to her groin. After the last kick, she is out, and they unzip her jacket

revealing the black leather catsuit and take the jacket off. Rob says: “This jacket protected her. Without

it, we are going to break all the bones in her body”. Although she is already out, Rob punches her hard

in the belly (close shot of the fist impacting on leather catsuit).

To be continued....

Language: Russian with English subtitles