Custom clip request 

I would like to order another custom with Melanie as the protagonist. The video will contain 3 parts. This time, there will be only Melanie and Rob as actors. It can be called “Melanie is defeated a third time”. It will be a continuation of the previous video “Melanie´s attempt to revenge was failed”. In the first part of the video, Melanie will wear a zipped black leather jacket, black leather pants, black gloves and, if it´s possible, the dominatrix black high leather boots which Naomi wears in the recent video “Mortal Kombat. Tiffany vs Naomi”. In fact, as we will see in the second part of the video, Melanie is supposed to be wearing, under the black leather jacket the black leather corset that Naomi wears in the same video. In the second part of the video, Melanie will be wearing the same black leather gloves, boots and pants of Part 1, but the leather corset instead of the black leather jacket (it is explained in the script). In the third part, she will wear the catsuit of my first two customs with also high black leather boots, but without the gloves. The video will be focused in the maximun realism of the impacts on Melanie´s body and leather clothes. Rob must not do any sound during the hits, so that we can hear the impact of the hits on Melanie´s body clearly. I want this sound to be more clear and raw, stronger than in the previous videos.

Part 1: Melanie (zipped up black leather jacket, and leather pants, gloves and boots) confronts Rob again. She looks at him and says: “This time, without tricks. The first one who touches the floor with the knee loses”. They start exchanging hits (all the hits that Melanie receives in this exchange, I want to see them clearly and in rather close shots. I don´t mind about the hits that Rob receives) one by one: Melanie punches Rob in the face and he hits back. The same a second time. Then Melanie punches him in the gut and he punches her back in the belly. Then a second exchange of gut punches. Then Melanie kicks him in the belly and he hits her back in the belly too. Melanie moves with this last hit but manages to keep her knee without touching the floor. The next hit is a kick to the groin from Melanie which makes Rob fall to the ground. Melanie says “I won. It´s over”. Rob gets up and seems at first to recognize the defeat, but the kicks Melanie hard in the groin and she falls to the floor. He takes Melanie from the flaps of her jacket and makes her up. He headbutts her twice and she falls on her knees. Robs kicks her really hard in the chest (I want to see the kick in a really close shot, with the frame only capturing Melanie from the waist to the head and Rob´s leg entering the frame and impacting on Melanie´s leather jacket). Melanie falls face up on the floor and tries to get up, but before doing that Robs kicks her hard in the belly. Rob places himself behind her, catches her neck with his arms and drags her and throws her against a wall. She impacts her back against the wall and before being able to react, he starts to punch her really hard in the belly. I want all these belly punches (around 20) in a close shot (the frame captures Melanie from just under her groin to the head in the first 10 punches and then an even closer shot in detail shot of her belly being punched). I want these hits to be really brutal and the impact on the leather jacket as hard (obviously, not hurting her) as possible. He sees she feels some pain but not too much, so punches her once in the face and she falls. She tries to get up but he starts kicking her brutally in the belly (Again, clear impacts and she occupying all the frame in close shot and the leg entering the frame and impacting on her body). After 10 kicks, he gets her up and knees her in the belly making her bow. With her bowed, he hammers her with three punches in her back (close shots again), hitting between her blade shoulders till she falls face down to the ground. She starts getting up but he kicks her hard in the side sending her face up to the ground. He starts punching her furiously in the belly again in close-up.

He punches her 12 times in this close shot, but she realizes that she feels pain but not extreme pain (she moans lightly from the hits). Again, remember to show the impacts on the leather as clear and hard as possible.

He starts getting furious and says: “I think this leather jacket is too solid and protects you”. He unzips her leather jacket and sees the leather corset under it and starts punching her hard on the leather corset in the belly area (with the jacket open but still on), with her still face up on the ground. Now she feels real pain and moans much more than before. After 12 belly punches (close-up), he throws a thirteenth punch and keeps the fist pressing on her belly as strongly as possible and she screams in pain (you can use the sound of the fist against rubber here). From the pain, she reacts furiously and takes the arm that he is using as a blade in her belly and push it up. Then she kicks him in the groin, gets up and get off her leather jacket saying “I don´t need this”.

PART 2: Melanie attacks Rob furiously but he is clearly stronger. After hitting him with two punches and one kick, she tries another kick and he catches her right boot. He punches her dominatrix boot 4 times (two in close shot) ans sees she is hurt so he thinks that is a weak point. He starts kicking on her boots, right and left, till she can´t stand up and falls on her knees. He catches her by her hair and she tries to quit his hands from her hair, rising her hands and letting all her torso exposed, so Rob punches her belly really hard with the other hand. I want five punches in a close shot (the frame captures her from the knees to her head) and another five punches in a closer, detail shot of the fist impacting on Melanie´s belly. After that she falls to the ground and starts crawling in cat position sexily, and Rob kicks her brutally on the side. She falls face down and Rob kneels and punches her hard 6 times on the sides and on the back. Then he puts her face up and stomps on her belly with his feet hard 20 times (the first ten hits in close-up)

And the last ten even closer.

After the last one, he keeps on pressing till she screams in pain and almost loses consciousness. He takes her by the neck, like he did in the first part and drags her and throws her again against the wall again and gives her the most brutal belly punch you can imagine making her bow in pain. Shet gets up again. Rob smiles and says “your leather jacket won´t protect you this time”: She gives her 10 brutal punches to the belly in a close-up.

And then another ten in a detail close shot even closer.

Please, remember to try to make the impacts as real and hard as possible. With the same detail shot, he splashes hard on her belly 10 times with the hand palm open. Then I want you to, in a similar detail shot, but more frontal perspective, show an ultra fast combo of right and left punches to Melanie´s belly (around 20 punches in 5 seconds). After this, Melanie, against the wall, starts falling slowly to the ground holding her belly in real pain and moaning strongly. He catches her and puts her up and then punches her hard in the chest over the boobs (so there is no risk of hurting her). I want these punch in a detail shot. Melanie occupies the frame from her boobs to the head and the fist enters the frame and impacts hard on her chest. Melanie falls to the ground and tries to get away by crawling but Rob stomps her in the ass twice, then hard in each boot three times, pressing on each boot hard after the third hit (detail shot of the boots being pressed here). Then he stomps hard on both of her thighs, and then stomps and presses on both of her gloves, hurting her hands. After this, he stomps hard on her back and starts pressing on it till she moans in pain. Then she catches her up in a reversal bearhug. She presses brutally on her waist till we hear bones cracking and she loses consciousness. She puts her on the ground totally ko.

PART 3: Melanie awakes on the black leather catsuit of my first two customs and high black leather boots (I don´t mind if they are the dominatrix ones of the two first parts of this video or the ones from my previous custom “Melanie´s attempt to revenge was failed”). She realizes the clothes change and looks Rob furiously. Rob says: “Don´t worry, I didn´t did anything to you, but now I will touch you”. He continues: “I propose one challenge: I could finish you now, but if you manage to hold a bridge position for 90 seconds and don´t fall to the floor, you can go and I won´t finish you”. Melanie answers: “And what will you do during those 2 minutes”, and Rob answers: “I will demolish your belly”. She accepts and puts herself on the bridge position. He starts hammering her belly with her fist ten times in a shot similar to this but much more closer:

I want a much more closer shot with Melanie in this position (Melanie´s body occpying all the frame, even if we can´t see Rob entirely, and maybe the camera a bit upper to better see the impact of the fist on the leather catsuit). After these 10 punches, I want other ten punches with a shot very close.

The position of Melanie´s body here is perfect. Please, don´t change it, but catch her body in a closer shot. I want to see the 10 belly impacts on her ultra tight leather catsuit clearly. On these 20 punches, she moans stronger as she gets more and more punches. After the tenth punch in this position, Rob´s fist keeps on pressing strongly (rubber sound here) and the camera approaches till we see a detail shot where we only see Melanie´s body from the groin to the chest. And in this detail shot, Rob punches her hard another five times. As Melanie holds it, Rob starts getting desperate and claws on her belly hard. But I don´t want these clawing to be like hits. He claws his fingers on his belly and keeps on pressing his fingers on it during 5/7 seconds. Around 60 seconds of the challenge have passed, so Rob tricks and drink a serum he had hidden. And then starts punching her brutally in a close shot like the one described above for the second round of ten punches. I know that this is a difficult position but, again, in this part, try to make the impacts on Melanie´s body seem the most brutal, realistic and hard possible. After eight absolutely brutal punches, she finally falls screaming in pain and touches the floor. “You have lost, I will destroy your body now”. She holds her belly in pain, but he puts her arms aside to expose her belly again. She is now on the ground. He kneels and starts punching her brutally in the belly. I would like her to inspire before each time she is going to be punched to mark her ribs and make the catsuit tighter.

Again, I want a shot closer than this but this style and he punches her brutally ten times in the belly. Then a closer detail shot from her groin to her neck, where we see Melanie´s body inspiring, and Rob´s fist punching her belly (another ten punches). She screams in pain. Then Rob starts change the punches for ten palm hand open splashes on the belly, and then 5 to the chest (over the boobs, so as not to hurt her). Then Rob, still in closer detail shot, starts clawing on her belly again really strongly and pressing with her fingers (rubber sound again here) till she starts screaming in pain and loses consciousness. He unzips her catsuit a liitle bit (not like in the previous video; I don´t want to see her bra, the catsuit must remain zipped along the belly ribs and lower part of the boobs). And with her ko, he starts punching her brutally ten times in the belly again in close shot. Please, make the impacts as much pshysical as possible.. When he finishes, he zipps her catsuit up again. Fade to black.

Melanie wakes up to see herself bounded with her hands over her head and against a wall, just like this, but like hang from a rope from the ceiling, his hands higher making her body tighter.

In a close shot, that captures her from the hips to a little bit over her head, I want Rob to destroy her body with around 30 punches (Most of them to the belly, but also to the sides, ribs and the chest). Every ten punches, his fist keeps on pressing her body. Then another ten punches to the belly in a closer detail shot with the frame capturing her from the hips to her upper belly. Then I want a similar shot, but this time her entire torso occupies the frame, and we see another ultrafast left/right punches combo (around 30 in 8 seconds, all over her torso). After this another ten palm hand open splashes to the belly. After the last one, Rob keeps on pressing with the open palm hand on her belly till she screams in pain and almost loses consciousness. Semi ko, she is unbound by Rob, who lifts her up face down, and puts her down to impact her belly against his knee (a “ribs breaker” instead of a backbreaker) With her bowed face down on his knee, he starts punching hard her bowed back and sides. Then he puts her face up, still on his knee and starts hammering her chest with his fist 8 times. Finally he starts hammering her belly brutally with his punches in a close shot. 

Then, another 10 hits in an even closer detail shot where in the frame we only see her body from the groin till her chest and Rob´s fist entering the frame and impacting on her belly hard. After the last punch, Rob´s fist (we only see the fist pressing the belly now in extremely close shot) keeps on pressing her belly (rubber sound) really strongly and the camera moves from Melanie´s belly to her ribs, then to her chest and the moves down to her face where we see how she supposedly losing her life. Even if she seems to have finished off, Rob puts her face up on the ground and starts pressing with his feet on her chest till we hear cracking bones sound. The End.

In my previous custom there were around 400 hits. In this one, around 360, but 50 of them (the two combos) will happen in just around 15 seconds, so, as the previous video length was 22 minutes, I think this video can be done at a 18-20 minutes length. As you can see, it focuses on belly punishment and the realism of the impacts on Melanie´s body and leather clothes. I have avoided boob punches here because I understand how difficult it can be for an actress that I adore. Please, tell me if Melanie will be available for shooting at the beginning of December / end of November. That is the best moment for me to pay.

Language: Russian with English subtitles