female fighting stories

  • Naughty students Naomi and Tiffany

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Naomi is a typical naughty girl who likes to make fun of others.

Tiffany is a typical good girl who does her studies and follows the rules.

Throughout the whole story, both of them will have their hands zip-tied behind their backs just like in Valerie's Nightmare and The Funny Drama in the Spa.

Tone: The story should be comedic.

Naomi will be wearing a strapless tube top and school skirt with her hair tied to pigtails and she will be bare feet with no shoes on.

Make sure her shoulders are completely bare and her naval is shown.

Tiffany will be wearing nothing but a bath towel just like in 'Valerie's Nightmare'. Her hair and body will be fully wet to indicate she just came out of the shower. Here is a sample of Tiffany's outfit:

Try to keep her hair and body wet as much as you can and try to have her hair behind her shoulders.

Make sure Naomi and Tiffany don't have any necklaces on them. Keep their shoulders bare.

Make sure they have their blindfolds on them instead of just having their eyes closed.


Story:

The teacher drags Naomi and Tiffany into the detention room by their ears, their hands zip-tied behind their backs. Naomi is in a strapless crop top and skirt, while Tiffany is wrapped in a towel with wet hair. Wincing in pain, the girls are told they're getting detention for fighting. Tiffany tries to explain Naomi pranked her in the shower, but the teacher doesn't care.

The girls are ordered to move a table to the center of the room, awkwardly lifting it with their tied hands. 


Doesn't matter if the table is big or small.

The camera focuses on their struggles:


CLOSE-UP OF NAOMI: We see Naomi struggling through her facial expression.


CLOSE-UP OF TIFFANY: We see Tiffany struggling through her facial expression.


They're then forced to write "I've been a naughty student" on the board, using only their mouths.


After the teacher leaves, the tension between Naomi and Tiffany quickly boils over. Naomi glares at Tiffany and spits out, "You're such a loser!" Tiffany shoots back, "Well, you're a total bitch!" Their words sting, and they step closer, shoving each other roughly with their shoulders since their hands are still tied behind their backs.


The shoves grow more forceful, and before long, the scuffle escalates. Naomi kicks at Tiffany, and Tiffany kicks back, both aiming blindly. As Tiffany attempts to kick Naomi, Naomi manages to trap Tiffany’s leg between her arms and back, locking it tight. Tiffany gasps, struggling to regain her balance, now forced to hop on one leg.


Naomi smirks, laughing as she leads Tiffany awkwardly around the room like a puppet, sticking her tongue out in mockery. Tiffany, clearly frustrated, wobbles and stumbles, trying to pull her leg free but unable to break Naomi’s grip. The sight is both chaotic and ridiculous, with Naomi giggling and Tiffany hopping helplessly, her face twisted in a mix of annoyance and embarrassment.


This comical struggle lasts for about 30 seconds, until Tiffany finally loses her balance and crashes to the floor with a thud. Naomi wastes no time, quickly straddling Tiffany’s chest, pinning her down. Grinning, Naomi teases her mercilessly, "Looks like I win, loser," while Tiffany squirms beneath her, still fuming but unable to escape.


Camera shot on both of them:


TIFFANY'S POINT OF VIEW: Naomi, sitting on Tiffany's chest, smiles at the camera, teasing Tiffany. Then she dances her shoulders around as she makes fun of Tiffany for 15 seconds.




NAOMI'S POINT OF VIEW: Tiffany, on the ground, looks angrily at the camera. Shouting at Naomi. Demanding her to get off of her for 15 seconds.


After a brief struggle, Tiffany finally shoves Naomi off. Naomi gets on her knees, a bit winded, but before Naomi can react, Tiffany quickly place Naomi's head between her thighs and locks her head while standing. Naomi is now stuck on her knees, unable to move her head or get up.


Naomi tries to shake free, but Tiffany's grip is too strong, keeping her firmly in place. Both girls are yelling at each other, their voices filled with frustration and anger. Tiffany glares down at Naomi, her expression smug as she maintains control. Naomi is stuck facing the floor, unable to move her head as she remains trapped between Tiffany's legs.


Despite the situation, the two continue arguing, exchanging heated words as Naomi struggles but fails to break free, her frustration growing with every second.


Then Naomi manages to break free and Tiffany falls to the ground. Naomi spots two blindfolds on the table and grabs one with her mouth.

OFFSCREEN: Naomi blindfolds Tiffany. Tiffany shouts "What are you doing?!"

Tiffany is now wearing a blindfold but there's a twist: Tiffany becomes invisible. Confused, Naomi searches for her while Tiffany kicks in random directions. Tiffany manages to kick Naomi which makes Naomi scared. Naomi then spots a nearby note that reveals that the blindfolds are magical, granting invisibility.

Naomi explains to Tiffany about the blindfold then suggests they both wear the blindfolds to escape detention unnoticed. At first, Tiffany resists but eventually agrees.

Tiffany tries to grab the blindfold, but since she can’t see, she keeps bumping her head against the table, fumbling around. Naomi, frustrated, rolls her eyes and manages to grab the blindfold with her tied hands. She carefully passes it over to Tiffany. As Tiffany tries to take the blindfold with her mouth, she keeps accidentally brushing against different parts of Naomi's body, making the process awkward and clumsy.

The teacher enters the room, looking around confused as he realizes the girls are nowhere to be seen. Meanwhile, Naomi and Tiffany are pressed against the walls, both blindfolded, standing stiff and tense with their teeth gritted in a comical way. In an attempt to sneak past the teacher, they move awkwardly in a funny, exaggerated manner, but because they can't see, they have no idea where they're going.

Tiffany leads the way with Naomi following closely behind, almost bumping into her. As Tiffany blindly leads the way, she accidentally bumps into a chair, knocking it over with a loud crash. The noise echoes through the room, causing Tiffany to freeze in place, her face tensing up in a funny, exaggerated expression of panic. Naomi, unable to stop in time, bumps into Tiffany from behind, and the two stand there, frozen and pressed together.

The teacher immediately turns in their direction, suspicious and alert, staring toward the sound. Tiffany's and Naomi's face remains comically stiff with fear as she tries not to move, hoping they won’t be discovered. Naomi stays close behind, both girls doing their best to stay quiet despite their growing tension. Suddenly, Tiffany runs into a table and stops, causing Naomi to crash into her from behind, creating a noise. Hearing this, the teacher starts moving toward them, and the girls quickly shuffle away but stumble into a wall. Naomi trips and falls to the floor while Tiffany, in her confusion, accidentally bumps right into the teacher.

The teacher, startled by the invisible impact, freezes in shock since he can’t see Tiffany. Panicking, Tiffany stands still, trying to back away quietly. But as she moves, the teacher keeps heading in her direction, completely unaware of what’s happening.

Panicking, Naomi pretends to be a ghost, saying, "Oooh, you're haunted!" Tiffany joins in, and they spook the teacher. They circle around the teacher and scare him with their spooky voice. After that, because they're wearing blindfolds, they bump into each other again, and Naomi yells, "Ouch! That hurts, you stupid bitch!" The teacher realizes they're not ghosts and starts swinging blindly.

The girls dodge his hits at first with funny panicked expressions then they fight back using kicks. Due to the blindfold, Naomi accidentally kicks Tiffany in the gut, leaving her doubled over in pain for a while. Meanwhile, Naomi keeps kicking the teacher. Once Tiffany recovers, she charges in but accidentally kicks Naomi in the gut, leaving her in pain. The teacher accidentally removes Tiffany’s blindfold, revealing her. Tiffany nervously smiles at the teacher. The teacher agrily glares at Tiffany. Naomi then jumps on his head and holds his head with her thighs. The teacher moves around, trying to get her off. Tiffany strikes him with a kick and knocks him unconscious. Naomi, still blindfolded, mistakenly kicks Tiffany until Tiffany shouts, "It’s me, you idiot!" She removes Naomi’s blindfold using her mouth.

They discuss what they should do. Then Naomi has an idea.

The teacher slowly wakes up, groggy, only to be met with the strange sight of Naomi and Tiffany standing in front of him, both wearing oversized sunglasses and caps, striking awkward hip-hop poses. Naomi, still in her tube top and skirt, and Tiffany, wrapped in nothing but her towel, look completely out of place. Their hands are still zip-tied behind their backs, making their exaggerated hip-hop gestures even more ridiculous.

For comedic effect, they start speaking in broken English, using slang, even though the teacher is speaking to them in Russian. Naomi confidently throws out phrases like, "Yo, wassup dogg," and Tiffany adds, "Dat’s wack, yo!" They try their best to look casual, despite their obvious nervousness.

(Have them continue to speak in broken English using hip-hop slang and have the teacher respond to them in Russian.)

The teacher, completely confused, doesn’t recognize them and asks where Naomi and Tiffany are. The girls quickly misdirect him, pointing in random directions, trying to stay cool. The teacher squints at them, then suddenly asks why their hands are tied behind their backs.

They freeze for a moment, exchanging nervous glances, clearly unsure of how to answer. After a pause, Tiffany blurts out in broken English, "It’s... uh, our gangsta style!" The teacher narrows his eyes, taking a closer look at them, causing both girls to tense up even more. After a long, awkward moment, he shrugs and leaves the room, still none the wiser. The girls let out a huge sigh of relief once he's gone.

Naomi and Tiffany let out a huge sigh of relief as soon as the teacher leaves the room, their tense bodies relaxing. With their hands still tied behind their backs, they awkwardly shake their heads and wriggle their shoulders to knock off the sunglasses and caps, which fall to the floor. Just as they’re catching their breath, Naomi flashes a mischievous grin. Without warning, she leans in and grabs the edge of Tiffany’s towel with her teeth. In one swift motion, she pulls the towel off, leaving Tiffany completely exposed. Tiffany screams in shock, desperately trying to cover herself with her arms and twist her body to hide. "Naomi!" she yells, her face flushing with embarrassment and anger. Naomi, laughing hysterically, darts out of the room with the towel still clamped in her mouth, her skirt fluttering as she runs. Tiffany, still trying to cover herself with what little she can, chases after Naomi, shouting in frustration. "Get back here!" Naomi continues sprinting away, towel in her mouth, laughing as Tiffany struggles to catch up.

(Similar to the ending of Valerie's Nightmare, you don't have to put in nudity since it's not allowed but shoot in a way that suggests that Tiffany's body is exposed after Naomi pulls her towel.)

Language: Russian with English subtitles

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Naughty students Naomi and Tiffany

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  • Product Length: 18 minutes
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