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ACTOR AND CHARACTERS

Actor                                  Character

Naomi                                  Naomi Jones

Diana                                   Diana Shaw 

The three men play several characters.

1st   Man                                The thug who is at the front door and a thug with a balaclava.

2nd Man                                 He’s Lenny Evans and a man with a balaclava

3rd Man                                  This is Wyatt Bennett, the boss of the gang and a man with a balaclava.

                                                                     VARIOUS NOTES

CHARACTERS

Naomi and Diana are 18 years old; Naomi behaves like a little girl while Diana is more adult.

The clothes of the actresses.

For Naomi: A jacket or something like that, pants and boots, she also has a bag.

For Diana: Jacket, pants and boots.

The clothes of the men.

The one who plays Lenny Evans, he has a leather or other jacket and pants, he is a young man but adult of character, when he is a second character, he has a balaclava and jacket or other and pants.

The one who plays Wyatt Bennett, he has a jacket and pants, he is an adult, he is a boss, when he is another character, he has a balaclava, jacket or other and pants.

The third male actor plays the guy who is at the front door, he does not have a balaclava, he has a jacket or other and pants, then he plays another character with a balaclava.

2.

LIVING ROOM, OFFICE AND FURNITURE

Of course, I suspect that you do not have an apartment with great furniture at your disposal but would it be possible to have a sofa and a table, a pièce of furniture perhaps but not important then in another room, a desk, one or chairs, this to give us a good impression for the script

LIVING ROOM, OFFICE AND FURNITURE

Of course, I suspect that you do not have an apartment with great furniture at your disposal but would it be possible to have a sofa and a table, a pièce of furniture perhaps but not important then in another room, a desk, one or chairs, this to give us a good impression for the script

THE FIGHT SCENES

Can the fight scenes be played very energetically with a lot of aggressiveness; I wrote in the script that Naomi must with the wicked face just as must be also Diana. One has the impression that the blows hurt very much without too much exaggeration for this to be true.

CHARACTERS AND DIALOGUES

I wrote dialogues for a well located action, it’s good if Naomi and Diana repeat the dialogues but hey, they do as they want, if they add lyrics, it’s also good, it’s just for a little consistency, to make a short film.

Naomi speaks like a young girl who is a bit dreamy, a girl of her age who is not always very adult except when she is fighting; there she is very aggressive, bad eyes.

Diana is more adult, she speaks like an adult person, she is very aware of reality, she too is aggressive and nasty eyes when she fights.

THE FIGTHS

Of course, you can add things to the fights that you are the director; it would be very good provided there is intensity, aggressiveness.

THE GENRE OF THE CLIP

I would like this clip to be very alive, to breathe a story, aggressive in combat, also sexy and for actresses to have fun playing as well as you, to make it happen; you need a little dose of madness.

3.

The context

Naomi Jones is a young student from Brooklyn college, she dreams of becoming an actress, at the beginning of the story, she has a date with Lenny Evans in a house in Brooklyn, he has promised to make her meet a film producer but Lenny Evans works for Wyatt Bennett, a man who runs a vast network of corrupt women. Naomi has a friend, Diana Shaw who is also a student; Diana wants to become a great journalist. The two girls have a common passion, martial arts.

                                                                         FIRST SEQUENCE

Naomi enters a house, she heads in a corridor.

                                                                             Naomi

                                                                Hello, there is someone?

 Her cell phones rings, she takes it out of her of her purse.

                                                                              Naomi

                                                 Lillian, yes I got there…No, I’m sure there is no danger…Okay, bye.

Naomi puts her cell phone away, a man appears behind her.

                                                                                 1er Man

                                                                        What are you doing the

                                                                                                     Naomi

                                                                       Hey, I’m a friend of Lenny’s

                                                                                1er Man

                                                                        Lenny is on the first floor

Naomi smiles at him.

                                                                                Naomi

                                                                                                   Thanks!

4.

                                                                     SECOND SEQUENCE

Lenny Evans sits on a sofa, he has a glass of champagne in his hand, the door opens and Noemi appears. Lenny gets up, he smiles.

                                                                                  Lenny

                                                                             Hey Naomi!

Naomi approaches Lenny.

                                                                                 Naomi

                                                                 Hey Lenny, how are you?

                                                                                                     Lenny

                                                                 Well, a glass of champagne?

                                                                                 Naomi

                                                                 You told me that you would be with the producer?

Lenny takes a glass of champagne from a table and gives it to Naomi.

                                                                                 Lenny

                                                                Mister Bennett is a little late; let’s drink to the new actress From Brooklyn.

Naomi takes the glass and she takes a sip of champagne, Lenny takes her by the arm and he leads her to the sofa. They sit. Lenny look at Naomi suddenly smiling Naomi drops the glass and she faints. Lenny gets up and pulls out a cell phone.

                                                                               Lenny

                                                                     Mr. Bennett okay you can come.

                                                                      THIRD SEQUENCE

Naomi wakes up, she sits on the couch, hands and feet are tied. The man at the front door sits on a chair right in front of her, watching her. Naomi looks at him then she says.

                                                                                Naomi

                                                                                    Please, you can detach me, the links are too tight.

5.

Man hesitates, Naomi looks at him like a scared little girl then the man gets up and unties Naomi.

                                                                                  1er Man

                                                                              You are kind, okay?

Naomi responds positively with her head while the crouching man removes the ties from his feet. Suddenly Naomi pushes the man with her foot, the man finds himself sitting on the ground, Naomi gets up and kicks her in the face, then Naomi wants to leave but the man grabs her ankle and she falls, he catches Naomi by the throat, they are on the ground, Naomi has nasty, aggressive eyes, she puts her fingers on the eyes of the man who screams in pain then she pushes the man to the side, *she sits on his chest and gives him hooks in the face then she gets up holding the man’s arm and puts her foot on the throat and twists his arm.*

Naomi puts her foot of the throat of the man and she twists his arm, during the dialogue, can we have a view on the man who has the foot on his throat then on the nasty face of Naomi?”

                                                                                    Naomi

                                                                       Who are you? Why did you tie me up?

Says Naomi with mean eyes.

                                                                                                       1er Man

                                                                                (Wincing in pain)

                                                                      It’s Lenny, he knows everything.

Naomi gives him a blow with the heel in the face and the man is knocked out.

                                                                     FOURTH SEQUENCE

Naomi leaves the room and she is in the corridor, she walks straight then she sees Lenny coming towards her, Naomi hides and as Lenny passes, she emerges behind him then takes his arm and twists him in the back.

                                                                                    Naomi

                                                               Why did you drug me? What do you want?

6.

                                                                                                     Lenny

                                                                     It’s good, I’II explain everything

Naomi loose Lenny.

                                                                               Naomi

                                                                          I’m listening to you.  

                                                                               Lenny

                                                                       Not here, let’s go to my office.

                                                                         FIFTH SEQUENCE

Lenny followed by Noemi enters a room, a man with a balaclava appears behind Noemi with a g and he points it at Noemi’s head.

                                                                           1er Man (with a balaclava)

                                                                                                 Do not move!

Lenny smiles and goes to his desk, Noemi looks at him.

                                                                                 Noemi

                                                                   Lenny, are you explaining to me?

                                                                                                     Lenny

                                                            Mr. Bennett has clients who fantasize about girls like you.

                                                                                 Noemi

                                                                                 What?

Naomi’s eyes are getting mean again, suddenly she spreads the arm of the man behind her then she nudges him on the face and she twists his arm to make him let go of the g then she kicks him in the face, another kick in the stomach, the man bends over and she kicks him again in the face, the man steps back, Noemi sends him a hook, the man blocks it and he sends a hook to Noemi who steps back then he sends another hook, Noemi blocks it and she hits him with his knee in the balls followed by a hook to the chin then another hook to the face and a circular kick, the man falls on the floor, Lenny appears behind her and wraps her arms around Noemi to control her. Noemi crushes her foot with the heel then she hits her nose with the back of her head, Lenny steps back, Noemi turns around and hits him with the knee in the balls, Lenny falls on his knees, Noemi hits him again with the knee in the face and Lenny falls on the floor. 

7.

The man with a balaclava appears behind Noemi and he rushes towards Noemi and they fall to the ground, the man is on Noemi and he grabs her throat, Noemi wraps her legs around the waist of the man then she tilts him to the side then she hits the man’s stomach with the back of her foot and she gets up, the man gets up too and he sends a hook, Noemi avoids it, the man sends another hook, Noemi blocks it and she hits him with a hook in the belly then she hits him with the elbow in the face, she crushes her foot then she strikes her foot the back of the other leg of the man who loses his balance and finds himself on the ground. Noemi hits him with the foot in the face and the man is knocked out, Noemi takes a breath while looking at the man. * Lenny wakes up, he is lying on the ground at Noemi who turns his back to him then he sees the g and he extends his arm to pick it up but when his hand lands on the g, a foot crushes his fingers, Diana appears.*

“It’s a moment that I like to see, it is when Diana walks on the hand of the man, can you make a closer zoom on the hand which takes the pistol and the foot of Diana who crushes it? The scène should not last long, Diana walks on the man’s hand to prevent him from taking his weapon then she removes her foot as soon as Noemi takes the pistol, as it happens in the movies”

                                                                                 Diana

                                                                           Oops, does it hurt?

Said Diana ironically looking at Lenny, Lenny looks at Diana, he is surprised, Noemi bends over to take the pistol and Diana takes her foot off Lenny’s hand. Diana looks Naomi.

                                                                                  Diana

                                                                    You explain to me what’s going on?

                                                                                                      Noemi

                                                                    He set me a trap to deliver me to bandits

                                                                                 Diana

                                                                                 What?

Lillian puts her foot on Lenny’s back then she takes her arm and twists her.

                                                                                 Diana

                                                                   Do you want me to rip her arm off? 

                                                                                  Lenny

                                                                                No, please!

Noemi approaches Lenny’s head, her feet close to Lenny’s face.

                                                                                 Noemi

                                                                          I prefer that he kiss my boots.

8.

Lillian twists Lenny’s arm again.

                                                                                  Diana

                                                                           You heard? Kiss his boots.

Lenny kisses Noemi’s boots, Noemi and Diana look at Lenny, they laugh while making fun of him then Noemi lifts her foot and put it on Lenny’s cheek and she presses, his eyes are mean.

when Lenny kisses Naomi’s boots, can we make close-ups, on the faces of Noemi and Diana who look down at Lenny then Lenny who kisses Naomi’s foots, don’t hesitate to do bottom-up views as if the camera were in place of the man on the ground.”

                                                                                 Noemi

                                                           The next time I meet you, I crush you like an insect, okay?

                                                                      SIXTH SEQUENCE

Naomi and Diana are in the corridor, they advance carefully then they hear men approaching. Naomi and Diana hide, two masked men appear, they pass without seeing Naomi and Diana who after, appear behind the two men.

                                                                                 Diana

                                                                                 Hey Guys!

The two men turn around and Noemi and Diana hit them with a hook in the face, surprised, the two men take steps back then there is one who takes out a pistol, Diana kicks her on the hand and the pistol goes on the ground, the other man sends a hook to Naomi who avoid and she kicks him on the stomach and a hook in the face and the man goes back, the first man grabs Diana by the arms, Diana hits him with the knee in the balls, then with the elbow, she hits him in the chin followed by a circular kick, the other man rushes on Naomi and they find themselves against the wall, the man give a hook on the stomach of Naomi which folds but she puts her hand on the face of the man and with the other hand, she gives him a hook in the balls, the man bends then another hook on the chin followed by a right kick in front and another circular kick on the face and the man goes to the ground, the first man has taken out a k and he sends the blade towards Diana with circular gesture, Diana avoids it while moving back, another circular gesture and Diana avoids the blade again then she kicks the stomach of the man another kick in the chin and the man steps back. then the man advances with the point of the blade straight ahead, Diana blocks the wrist then twists it in the back of the man who releases the k, the other man sends his foot to Naomi who blocks it then another circular kick but Naomi avoids it then she sends him a right kick in front on the belly of the man who leans then a hook and a blow elbow followed by a circular kick to the face.

9.

 meanwhile, Diana is behind the man and she puts his arm around his neck and she squeezes, the man struggles but Diana does not let go, she clenches her teeth under the effort and the man lets herself slowly fall to the ground. The other man is on all fours and Naomi kicks him on the ribs then another kick in the face and the man collapse to the ground, knocked out. Diana looks Naomi.      

                                                                                   Diana

                                                                                  Come on!

Naomi and Diana head for the stairs and they hurry down.

                                                                   SEVENTH SEQUENCE

Naomi and Diana approach the exit door, Mr. Wyatt Bennett with another masked man, appears with a pistol.

                                                                              Mr. Bennett 

                                                                          Stay where you are!

Naomi and Diana look at Mr. Bennett and they raise their arms.

                                                                         EIGHTH SEQUENCE

Naomi and Diana are sitting on the sofa; Mr. Bennett is next to a table, he takes a tube of tablets and he swallows a pill, he looks at Naomi and Diana.

                                                                            Mr. Bennett

                                                                   Pills it’s for my heart, I’m emotional.

He’s laughing then he approaches Naomi and Diana.

                                                                            Mr. Bennett

                                                           I have a client who pays well for girls who are wild

                                                                                                   Naomi

                                                                          *You are mean.

* Naomi talks like a little girl sulking, frowning.*

Said Naomi with the face of a sulking little girl. Mr. Bennett and the two men laugh.

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                                                                            Mr. Bennett

                                                                    And what are you going to do?

Naomi looks at him and with his index finger, she tells him to approach, Mr. Bennett bends down with a smile, Naomi grabs Mr. Bennett by the throat with one hand and the other, she grabs the balls and she presses them balls Mr. Bennett screams in pain and doesn’t move, the two men approach to release their boss, Diana gets up and she kicks the belly of a man who bends and a circular kick to the other man who steps back, Naomi pushes Mr. Bennett with his foot and Mr. Bennett falls on the floor, Naomi gets up and kicks him the face, a man sends a hook to Diana who blocks him and she gives him a hook on the stomach then a hook in the face and a straight kick in front and the man steps back, the other man grabs Lillian by the waist and he squeezes, Diana struggles, Naomi suddenly appears and she sends a hook to the man who drops Diana, then Naomi kicks him in the balls and kicks him straight in front on the stomach, the man steps back, he wants to give a hook,  Naomi blocks it, another hook, Naomi blocks it too then  Naomi sends him a chin hook. the other man approaches Diana and he sends his foot, Diana blocks him and she kicks him straight ahead then a kick in the chin, the man steps back then he sends a hook, Diana avoids him, he grabs Diana by the arms, Diana strikes him with his knee in the balls then she gives him a blow of the head on the face, the man falls on the ground. The other man fighting against Naomi took out a k, he approaches Naomi and he sends the blade in his direction, Naomi blocks her wrist and she twists it, the man drops the k then Naomi kicks him in the face, another kick in the balls and another right kick in front on the stomach, the man falls on the floor, the two men are on the ground, knocked out. Naomi and Diana turn to Mr. Bennett crawling on the floor towards the tube of fallen pills near the table. * The face of Mr. Bennett is scared, his hand wants to take the tube but suddenly Naomi appears and she pulls the tube away a little with her foot, Mr. Bennett brings her hand closer to the tube but Naomi pulls it away a little bit with her foot, Mr. Bennett begs.*

We see Mr. Bennett crawling and his arm reaches for the tube, the hand which approaches the tube then the foot of Noemi appears and she pushes a few centimeters the box of pills, there we see, seen from the bottom up, the face of Noemi which is ruthless for Mr. Bennett tries again to take the tube but Noemi always pushes the tube of a few centimeters

                                                                               Mr. Bennett

                                                                          Please my heart hurts.

Diana appears, she leans towards the face of Mr. Bennett with a mobile in hand, she says.

                                                                                 Diana

                                                                  It’s the police; admit that you are a bandit!

                                                                                                Mr. Bennett

                                                                  I’m Wyatt Bennett, come and stop me.

11.

Diana stands up, Mr. Bennett makes a quick gesture to take the tube but Naomi walks on his wrist, Mr. Bennett screams in pain and his hand releases the tube.

                                                                             Naomi 

                                                                      Hey, I didn’t say yes.  

Naomi is the young student again then she launches the tube, far from Mr. Bennett, Mr. Bennett looks up at Naomi then he faints. Naomi smiles at Diana