female fighting stories

  • The Burglar's Mistake

Custom clip request. 

It starts and ends with just single isolated blows.After each blow, the male freezes in position, and Lesley goes back to her reading. There is there not much action in the opening minutes other than Lesley reading. These shots show the male in the foreground or background, frozen like a mannequin, while Lesley calmly reads her book. In the middle of the clip, there is a two, maybe three minute action sequence, and then it slows down again into Lesley reading, and maintaining a feeling of menacing dominance over the male.The action sequence should be quick and exciting. Just showing the blow, the man's reaction, then moving on to the next blow. No blow is repeated directly ie A punch to the stomach isnever followed with a punch to the stomach, but by a strike to some other part of the body. This way each individual blow will appear more devastating. The strikes I would like to see should included kicks to the head, to the stomach, to the back ofthe knee , to the ass, to the balls, slaps to the face.The baseball bat will also be used for some of the strikes.Dress: Lesley could wear something different from the last custom, just for variation. [I'll leave this up to you, Lesley.] I would like the man to wear very tight jeans, like in the first custom clip you did for me. He could wear different jeans, black or white even, once they wereas tight fitting as the ones in w-l-end2. If possible he might wear boots as seen in the photos.

Other requirements: A hand g*n, a book, an armchair, and a baseball bat. If you can't get a baseball bat, a stick of some kind, the same length, and maybe slightly lighter if you prefer. Half a brush handle might do, about two feet in length. Most of the instructions are on the two pdf files I am sending you. I would like you to follow the sequence and pictures as closely as possible, especially the frozen poses of the burglar. Try to recreate them as exactly as possible, please. I have also suggested some simple dialogue, which I would like you to follow, especially the sequence on page 25 on PDF 1. Lastly, the most important thing, is that the clip should feel like a realistic, tense confrontation between a young woman and a threatening burglar. There should be a sense of tension and conflict throughout, and Lesley should be cold, ruthless and domineering. It might be a good idea for her not to look directly at the man, except when pointing the g*n at him. She should set about her work in a businesslike, efficient way, and ignore him completely, especially when reading.

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The Burglar's Mistake

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